picture 2 done

 

also a preview of page 6 so far. I'll leave words in for now since it means nothing to you guys.. but as i get farther i will offer less previews.

 

awesome!!!

one thing though, you should add a comma after Bruce... "Bruce, is it..." :-P

 

ok just to set the record straight i did put a comma and then i typed it into MS Word and ran the spelling and grammer check and it told me not to put a comma...so which is it?

 

I'm pretty sure you were correct and MS was wrong.

 

yeah i think that MS didn't know that Bruce was a name so thats why it said that.. we are smarter the MS Word. thanks Lalo.

I put a comma back in.

 

Its killing me that I dont know the story line to your comic!!!

When are you planning on releasing the book?

 

unfortunatly at this rate it won't be done for 2-3 months.

and i can't give the story away until you read it.

I'll give you some details.

Batman and Superman are brothers and Gotham is representative of Hell and Metropolis Heaven.

The characters involved are Batman, Superman, their father, Robin and Joker.

 

Man, I can't wait to read it!

Will it be an online comic?

 

yes i'll post it on my website.

 

Great work, I can't wait to read the story line. I know the art will be awesome.

 

new picture


how the page is coming so far.

 

that is one good looking page!

Have you created the cover yet?

 

no the cover i havn't decided on yet.

 

looking great Chris!

 

That's a great start, can't wait to see it all.

 

i had to draw this picture on paper 5 times before i did one that i thought was acceptable..you can tell i changed it since that last post i did..completely new drawing then what i had in its place. i'm still not to happy with it but its staying.



how the page looks so far without text.

 

WOW chris that is looking great!!

 

thanks.

1 down...14 more pages and a cover to go...d'oh

 

It does look better! Great looking page