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Old Jun 1, 2005 | 10:15 AM
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Here are some of my poems and pictures. You can see more at DeviantArt.com

Missed Opportunities

I remember the way
you touched me.

You caressed my face
letting your
fingers
slide over my cheek
and down my neck.

So Sweet.
So Loving.

You pressed your
lips
to mine.
My whole body went
numb.

I should have kissed back
(how stupid of me!)
but chains held me back
(they always held me back)

Now I'm free
And You Don't Care.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Blush

I sit quietly
Waiting for the approach.

I can feel you coming.

I know that
those blue eyes
have it in for me.

They look so

innocent

But I know better.

It doesn't take much
For you to seduce me.

You can just look
at me
and my ears
get hot.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Irreversible

My Heart is shattered
Like glass falling from a shelf
The wound is fatal.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Waiting For My Prince To Come

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The Ides Of May

My Tears flowed like Rain
After you left.

I collapsed on the couch
And buried my head
Into a pillow
To muffle the Pain.

I couldn't even watch you leave
Like I usually do.


I knew you wouldn't be coming back.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We Only Have A Physical Connection

Pink Satin Sheets
Empty
and Cold.
None of the
Previous Passion
Rests here tonight.

I am Alone

mentally...


physically.

I can't
Break my Heart
anymore.
Soon the glue
won't stick.

I just wish
you would
Love me
Like you
Kiss me.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Comments are always welcome....good or bad!
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Old Jun 1, 2005 | 10:33 AM
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Very nice body of work! Seems you've tasted heartache . . .
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Old Jun 1, 2005 | 11:42 AM
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poetry is my weak point, but it is definitely good and gets your idea's across in a very good fashion.

The black and white photo defintely is something I like. Its amazing how things turn out when the color is no longer part of the perception. I like that particular pic, but I was curious about the earrings, look very native americanish from what I can tell. Guess its hard to tell exactly with the pic being fairly small.
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Old Jun 1, 2005 | 11:00 PM
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Great poems Brooke, welcome back!
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Old Jun 3, 2005 | 05:47 AM
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Originally posted by Scothew@June 1, 2005, 11:45 AM
poetry is my weak point, but it is definitely good and gets your idea's across in a very good fashion.

The black and white photo defintely is something I like. Its amazing how things turn out when the color is no longer part of the perception. I like that particular pic, but I was curious about the earrings, look very native americanish from what I can tell. Guess its hard to tell exactly with the pic being fairly small.
Those earrings are just like rinestone earrings...I guess it's the shape of them that makes them look like that.

Thank you guys for the comments! And Evil_Capri...yes I have tasted hearache...alot. It's hard being single
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Old Jun 9, 2005 | 04:23 PM
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Graceful Misery


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Old Jun 16, 2005 | 10:33 PM
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Ahh another deviant art person..very cool stuff brooke!
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