Chris is right.
Varying the line weight/thickness is one of the big points in comic drawing.
It does look great, nice work with the hands.

 

Man, that is looking awesome!!! lol

How did you do that? did you just fill in with black, or are those lines that are already shaped like that?

 

I just masked off where i thought needed a harder line and painted it in.

 

Happy! Happy! Joy! Joy!
I like varying line thickness... Thanks guys. It looks a lot better now

 

Sweet...Great Job! looks awesome!!!

 

HEre it is with the Famous jacket colored... gotta turn in a paper, and I'll be right back to finish this up!

 

lookin good lalo!!

im a big fan of comic book art.. i just tend not to actually draw them

cant wait to see it finished

 

Nice start on the color fill.

 

HEre is Rock all colored up...
Any last tips before I start placing some blue flames???

 

Now that you have added color ( which looks great)...

The fingers on the "far" hand actually look wider, (and larger) than the close hand.
The perspective distance should have them being short/smaller as they are
further away from the viewer's eye.

 

That Darned Right Hand!!!!

Working on making it bigger and better

 

Here it is with the flames

 

Lalo that truly kicks ***!..

btw...wanna do the coloring on my comic project? you did an awesome job on it!

 

Thanks a lot Chris!
I feel like tightening up the flames (I played the game and noticed the flames go in a differnt pattern ) I'll do that tommorow.

I wouldnt mind coloring a couple of pages for you I bet it's HARD work lol

 

It's great Lalo.
Lots of action to the flames.

 

Lalo that really rocks man!!

 

Thanks a lot Chuck and Doug!
I'm thinking of using this same character to practice other poses, seeing that he gets in some really cool ones in the video game.