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Old Mar 10, 2005 | 08:16 PM
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either way here ya go... BTW if any1 tries to steal this I'll ... lol

TEARS OF BEER

Pour out a tall one,
for homies long gone.
I hate to c the pain arise,
but someday, everyone dies.
So pour it out as tears take form,
picture a baby at the wake is born,
the daddy's in the casket;
words were said, it got drastic.
It's sad, words can make a person rethink themselves,
do sumthing stupid, hazardous to their health.
Sometimes life feels so hopeless, life feels so wrong
kneeling in a stormy cemetary at night, just to say so long.
What a tragedy, death is born
concieved & deceased before the spirit is formed.
Life is given, life is taken away,
why fear death? We all die some day.
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Old Mar 10, 2005 | 10:28 PM
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::bows before the master of poetry::
:bowdown:
seriously I think someone has been
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Old Mar 11, 2005 | 12:19 AM
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hehehe just a wee bit there

nice job there Jason now get a beat flowin n record it...

yeah....about your...uhh.... stealing policy.....what if i told you i just made $20mill..... :hiding: and it wasnt from Super lotto.... :hiding:


:P
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Old Mar 11, 2005 | 11:23 AM
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Originally posted by future9er24@March 11, 2005, 1:22 AM
what if i told you i just made $20mill..... :hiding: and it wasnt from Super lotto.... :hiding:


Well we know it wasnt from your lucrative athletic career


Cool Poem, defintely art forum worthy
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Old Mar 11, 2005 | 01:44 PM
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Originally posted by Scothew@March 11, 2005, 10:26 AM

Well we know it wasnt from your lucrative athletic career


OUCH! lol
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Old Mar 11, 2005 | 01:45 PM
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Hey Jason... cool stuff

and you might want to use this smily next time :P :

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Old Mar 11, 2005 | 03:25 PM
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thanx yall....
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Old Mar 11, 2005 | 06:25 PM
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Originally posted by thezeppelin8+March 11, 2005, 2:47 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(thezeppelin8 @ March 11, 2005, 2:47 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-Scothew@March 11, 2005, 10:26 AM

Well we know it wasnt from your lucrative athletic career


OUCH! lol
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lucrative? since when....

scott, remind me to humiliate you on National TV when i get accepted into the NFL hall of fame.
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Old Mar 12, 2005 | 10:04 AM
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Don't think Scott will live another million years.... j/k
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Old Mar 12, 2005 | 12:38 PM
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your on the list too
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Old Mar 12, 2005 | 12:47 PM
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:hiding:
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Old Mar 14, 2005 | 08:07 PM
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Originally posted by future9er24@March 11, 2005, 2:22 AM

nice job there Jason now get a beat flowin n record it...

speaking of that I did try rapping once... didn't work too well, here is some of the uhh... lyrics....

(Verse 1)
I've looked for respect in all the wrong places/seen hatred and all its ugly faces/my dad once told me "sun get off ya a** & get wealthy/if you ever expect to live healthy/ because money makes the world turn/ one day the evil, they'll burn"/ I've been stabbed in the back/ homedogs laugh when I rap/.....and it hurts.....it hurts to see your best friends turn their backs on you/ a man can survive one, but two/ that's a different story/ it messes wit ya head 4 shorly/ I can never trust anutha' man/ that's why I stay strapped wit' my pistol close to hand/ cuz ya' never know when anutha' will spring up from the bushes/ b***hes & hata's just tryin' 2 push us...../ wanna see us in our caskets/ get mugged wit r a** kicked/ b**tards, so wut you say when ya every1 doubts you/ every1 just seems happy without you/.... f**k 'em all, watch 'em fall screamin "Thug Street!"/ muthaf***a's come see/ I'm here now on tha scene an'/ havin' trouble breathin' as I stand face to face wit tha demon/ shoot out in the streets,/ even if I die I'll never retreat/ defeat isn't so bad when you know you stayed/ muthaf***as can't call you afraid/ if you died for the struggle and lost the fight/ just know ya lost for right/ if a man isn't as true as what's in his heart/then he can't be trusted, not by far/ the hardest thing in life/ is holding ya head up, even if your not right/ continuing in the night,/ under dark grey clouds, as lightning strikes/ thunder's bellow makes ya' heart shake/ alone in the street as ya heart breaks/ feeling like ya wanna die, start to cry/ as you look into the sky....it's rainin'....
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Old Mar 14, 2005 | 08:39 PM
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not bad bro
if the beat was good (forgive me i cant read a beat :P ) i'd totally listen to it.

RECORD!!!!
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Old Apr 8, 2005 | 09:07 PM
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if u buy me a decent mic... there like $400... that would pay 4 the dvd player I want 4 my car....
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Old May 25, 2005 | 11:35 PM
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How does one drive with a DVD in the car , unless you in the back seat ? I've pulled up and seen them the kids thought they were it and almost stoved a transit bus doing it ! Brain Deads
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Old May 26, 2005 | 09:41 AM
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it wouldn't be for driving... only when parked...
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